Thursday, 25 June 2015

Adjectives story

The mad evil octopus went on ramps and hit the shark. He swam and swam and bravely inked away to his mum in the pineapple under the sea. As happy as can be in the sea. His dad came back and he was has hairy as big foot. He was the hairy water ape. He swam away and he found Nemo his water cucumber. He went to his friend and gave him  a bro cuddle. The shark came back and ate him and he got ugly. Then someone made some art and everyone thought it was amazing. The Octopus went to the art gallery to have a look at the sea art and the Octopus was happy because it was so fabulous.

1 comment:

  1. Amazing Corbin. I like it how you highlighted the adjectives in your story and I also like it how you put the adjectives in your story to make it better.

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